Saturday, October 17, 2009

O captain, my captain

From Duncan Pflaser

First draft finished! Currently called "How to Suck Seed While Really Trying", but I think the play outran that title, and I'll probably be going with a Walt Whitman quote instead. Going to bed for a couple of hours to look at the draft with fresh eyes.

I think I preferred having two parameters- it made the ideas come quicker.

AS Adam, early in the morning,
Walking forth from the bower, refresh’d with sleep;
Behold me where I pass— hear my voice— approach,
Touch me— touch the palm of your hand to my Body as I pass;
Be not afraid of my Body.

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